So, I started something else. My theory is that come December I can erase all that stuff I don't like and then finish the chapter properly, but in the meantime, I'll write what I was actually planning to write before I decided to do The Kingmaker's Ring instead. Namely, Freak Investigations, Inc., which is - how did I put it - 'a story of a girl named Bella and how she always ends up solving mysteries with a supernatural bent. She also has a stalker vampire she can't stand.'
I've already written the first two chapters. ^_^
I'll post chapter fourteen of The Kingmaker's Ring to fier and then start posting that instead. (Sorry, joellehart! But I will finish it, I promise!)
If you would like to be able to read it (and you can't already), friend fier and I'll friend you back. ^_^